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Tuesday, 6 August 2019

Essay to debate - English

School shops should only be allowed to sell healthy food.

Do u agree that the school canteen should sell only healthy food? Raise your hand if you agree. If there’s only healthy food in our canteen there are no many people would buy. I only agree when it’s equal like there is non-healthy food and healthy food.

I agree that healthy food is good for your health but if you only sell healthy food in school shops without non-healthy like example pizza, hot chocolate, teriyaki, and brownies. Not many people would buy without non-healthy in my opinion. If the school sells like a sandwich with veggies and a salad it would be good because it’s good for your health. I think schools should sell both healthy and nonhealthy food. I don’t think unhealthy food should be banned in school shops but there should at least some healthy options and the same price as unhealthy food. If kids don’t have any other choice, they will eat sandwiches and fruit instead of junk food it’s okay to eat junk but not every day you will get a stomach ache.

The healthy food is good for ur health and the non-healthy food is yummy because I don’t really like vegetables in my opinion. If the schools banned non-healthy food people will end up to the local shops anyway. 

1 comment:

  1. Great argument, Sheen!
    I liked how you thought about how students would just go to local shops anyway.
    You can't put "raise your hand if you agree" in a piece of writing, but you can definitely use this technique if you do your speech on this topic!

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