Pages

Tuesday, 22 October 2019

Creative Writing - English

Title: Fell in love with my bestfriend 

Once upon a time, there was a girl named Miya and his classmate Alucard and they are Year 9. They have been classmates. They always talk to each other and they always in a group if there are groupings. At first, they meet they feel shy and not talking too much until they start talking. In term 2 they start talking and when they saw each other in the morning they say good morning and even after school they say goodbye. Inside the classroom, they have different group Miya have a group of girls and Alucard have a group of a boy. Every lunchtime and interval they are not together only in class they always talk. But it’s time to say goodbye because it’s the end of the year in school. In prizegiving in school only Miya had an award and Alucard came to congratulate her because Alucard did not have an award. 
Alucard: Congrats :)
Miya: Thankyou :)
* They started walking *
Miya: Alucard! can you please treat me with food? * Cute face *, please
Alucard: Fine fine fine I'll treat you :)
Miya: yeaaayyy!! * excited * :D
* Went to Mcdo *
* After Mcdo... Home *
1-year later….

It’s back to school now they are Year 10. Miya was walking with her friend to go to school and Alucard pass by her and Miya didn’t notice that it was Alucard because Alucard has changed. When they arrive at school, They line up to go inside the Auditorium because that’s their meeting point with other students. Once they were inside they finally meet in the auditorium. They smiled at each other. After the meet up in the auditorium, they went to their classroom but still, Miya and Alucard didn't talk yet. They feel awkward because they don't text or message since their no school they don't keep in touch with what's going in their life. The class had started and Alucard started talking
Alucard: Hi * wave * :)
Miya: *Looked at him * Hello :)
They started talking again. They stop talking when they are with their friends. At this time, they only talk when they ask a question at each other. They are not the same as before that they always talk.
After school, it's time to go home they didn't say goodbye at each other at this time. Miya is with her friend's they went to KFC after class.

* Inside the Kfc *
* Playing Truth or Dare *
* Mia's turn *
* Picks truth *
Friend 1 - ooohhh Mia... Who's your CrUsH???
Mia - uhmmm idk
Friend 2 - Is it AlUcArD??? ( with a smirk face )
Mia - No no no it's not alucard ( did a X on her arms ) i don't have one
Friend 1 - Hmmmm You sureee?
Mia - Yea im suree

* After they finish eating in Kfc *
* Went home *
* Friend 1 and Mia walked together *
SUDDENLY....
* Mia and Alucard meet *
* Mia and Alucard smiled *
Friend 1 - Mia I think Alucard Likes you ( with smirk face )
Mia - No he doesn't ( Shake head )
* Friend 1 keep teasing her until they get separate way *
* Mia thinks inside: Does he likes me? *
* Alucard thinks inside: Does she likes me? *
* THE END *
















2 comments:

  1. Nice work, Sheen!
    Your storytelling is looking good. You've described what your characters personalities are like (shy) throughout the story. Next you could try including a description of what they look like. Maybe their eye/hair colour?
    The story is called "love at first sight"
    So maybe you could describe their thoughts/feelings at this moment.

    ReplyDelete
  2. And if you do this - you should put it right at the start of a story, as your HOOK.

    Like this:

    (The moment they saw each other. Describe what they SAW, what they THOUGHT, and how they FELT)

    (Then write:)
    Once upon a time there was a girl named...

    ReplyDelete

To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.

Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.